Hi! I'm preparing some scripts for making demos, and I'ld like your input on whether or not you think some changes could bring a better diversity to them? I apologize for the long post, and thanks for your input! Commercial Script: Hi! Welcome to LeapSheep. Press any button to continue. Red! Good choice. (big smile, excited) Hydraulic locks occur when fluids are trapped in the cylinder. Since the fluids can’t compress but the cylinder head has momentum, that energy will be transferred to the crank shaft, which breaks under the force. (educational) Hey, Friends! Warmer weather means that the food truck is back on base! We’re parking at the Admin. Building Tuesday, April 8th, from 11:00 to 1:00. (great deal) When I found out I had cancer, I turned to Penta Health. Their doctors are professional and care about you as an individual. Their personalized approach reassured me that I was their first priority. (serious, where find help) Welcome to Kamp Kosmo, where your dog is treated like a champ! (Champ) You called? (bark) We offer boarding in a home setting with plenty of walks (oh, good), tummy rubs (oh, boy!), and snacks (take me there! I can’t handle it.) We don’t charge extras for the everyday care of your dog. We treat your dog like our own. (upbeat) Want to honor those who have gone before? Head to Lebanon’s Pioneer Cemetery this Saturday, May 9th, for our annual Honor event. Starting at 9:00 in the morning, we’ll highlight some of the men and women buried in Pioneer Cemetery who served their country in diverse ways. (informational) Character Script: Stop, Sammy! You’re being mean. Mom says to be nice. (little girl, upset) You call this incredible? I call it terrible. (pt) It has no taste. I teach you. (French accent, doubtful, take charge) Aw, thanks for saying that. I didn’t think I did it that well. (Champ, embarrassed) Look, Mr. Smith said that we need to follow the clues to find the treasure. How hard can this be? (own voice, wondering)