Hi everyone, I'd appreciate some honest feedback on my latest upload. This video is the final chapter of an 11-month homemade wine project where I turned grapes into rosΓ© wine and documented the entire process from fermentation to bottling. Before publishing, I spent much more time than usual improving: - Thumbnail design - Title - Hook/first 30 seconds - On-screen text - Retention pacing - The video has only been live for about 18 hours, so it's still early, but I'd love feedback from other creators. Specifically: 1. Would YOU click this thumbnail/title combination if it appeared on your homepage? 2. Does the first 30β60 seconds hook you? 3. Is there a point where you would stop watching? 4. If you were me, what would you improve before making the next video in this series? Video:https://youtu.be/U8VdieOQAvM?si=B-IhQvOBkrSeZtW3 I'm especially interested in feedback on packaging (CTR) and retention, since those are the areas I've been working hardest to improve. Thanks in advance for any constructive criticism!