I joined ClarityScribe, plus thanks for pure awesomeness!

🌺Aloha

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thank you so much for an amazing session yesterday - Ida from Denmark here :D (the one that knows Ray from PLF ;) - thank you so much for your PLF P.A.S.T.O.R. anecdote, Ray that was so inspiring to hear!) -

🤩 I am super happy and wildy optimistic about today having signed up for ClarityScribe🎉 and looking SO much forward to getting to work with it. For the last 1½ year I have been working quite extensively with Chat GPT, but I feel I´ve started to hit a wall with it, what it can and cannot do for me. I hope with CS✒️ that my copy and textwork will become more on point and much much more professional.

I could talk and talk, but for now what really is taking up my mind space is that I am heading into one of my biggest and most important launches of the year - to my painting membership - and that brings me back to the aching fact that my sales copy both for my launch sign up page (a $10 workshop) and for the membership sign up page is painfully flawed or more accurately, next to non-existent. And it hurts my brain to think of, and there is only 14 days to my launch kicks off.

As painful as it is, here is the link to my launch sales page, non-existent copy and all: https://atelieridaandersenlang.simplero.com/page/676565

As you might recall me say in zoom 1, my native language is danish but I sell to mainly US, Canada and also Australia and writing good texts in english has been a major stumbling block for me. My achilles heel.

I was wondering if it´s realistic here during the writing workshop to get to WORK with my launch sales page? This is the most urgent writing task I have in front of me and it would be pure magic if I could get started writing it with CS with a little bit of help from you.

NOTE: As you might notice in this text, my native languag is NOT english. I write english relatively fine, but "as a dane" - what we in fact call denglish or you could even call it viking english ha ha. I have decided to leave this post unedited so you can see my level of english, as it flows from me, before editing anything, typos n all. It comes with some real challenges being bi-lingual. The fact alone that I speak danish all day long and then sit down to write and work in english. That alone takes some of my mental bandwidth.

✒️ Thank you already for pure awesomeness! What an amazing launch you have here, Ray! And as you know I´ve seen some launches by now, by some of the best. But this is the best launch experience I´ve had so far, since I first discovered PLF in 20217 (joined in 2018).

I´m a pretty pure PLF evangelista, and even did a video testimonial with Jeff in 2021 - the most starstruck situation I´ve ever found myself in LOL.

Looking forward to learn your rocket fuel copy, Ray and amp up my game.

With gratitude and joy,

Ida

PS - the image here is the art from an online lesson of mine called "Tribute to the Oceans". this is the stuff I live from, recording my painting process and teaching off of it online. I´ve done that since 2015.

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