Need quick feedback on my cold email copy

Hey guys, I’m starting cold email this week and wanted to get some quick feedback before I start blasting.

Here are the offers + the related copy, would really appreciate if someone experienced could take a quick look and tell me if I’m on the right track or if I should tweak anything.

1- PPC Report generation

Hey {{firstName}},

Know this is out of left field, but I help marketing agencies like yours automate report creation.

Just installed this automation at [competitor company name], and they’ve been able to cut 20+ hours of manual dashboard work.

Basically, the system pulls data from all your ad accounts, automatically generates client-ready dashboards, and formats everything neatly — all with a single click.

You down for a 15-30min talk this week? If yes but you want more info just lmk and I can record a loom to show you how it works.

Thanks {{snedingAccountFirstName}}

2- SEO Offer (Content Creation for Clients):

Hey {{firstName}},

Know this is out of left field, but I help SEO agencies like yours automate content creation for your clients.

Just installed this automation at $100K+ agency in Calgary, and they’ve been able to cut 20+ hours of manual content work every week.

Basically, the system crawls relevant sources, analyzes competitor content, and generates ready-to-use client content — blog posts, page copy, headlines, CTAs — all in one report for you to present to your clients.

You down for a 15-30min talk this week? If yes but you want more info just lmk and I can record a Loom to show you how it works.

Thanks, {{sendingAccountFirstName}}

3- Competitor Intelligence Reports:

Hey {{firstName}},

Know this is out of left field, but I help marketing agencies like yours automate competitor research.

Just installed this automation at $350K+ PPC agency in Calgary, and they’ve been able to cut 20+ hours of manual competitor analysis every week.

Basically, the system runs competitor audits automatically, tracks their ads, keywords, content strategy, and generates comprehensive reports ready to share with clients — all in one neat dashboard.

You down for a 15-30min talk this week? If yes but you want more info just lmk and I can record a Loom to show you how it works.

Thanks, {{sendingAccountFirstName}}

4- Cold Outreach Service

Hey {{firstName}},

I know this is out of left field, but I help PPC agencies bring in more clients on autopilot.

Just partnered with a $350K/yr PPC agency in Calgary and helped them book consistent sales calls from companies actively running Google Ads.

TLDR: I'd fill your calendar with high-intent prospects who already spend on ads and are actively looking for better performance.

Would you be open to a 15-min call about this? If yes but you want more info just lmk and I can record a Loom to show you how it works.

Thanks,

If you actually read through all the copies — you’re a legend 😂

Seriously though, would love to hear what you think or what you'd change. Any feedback helps.

Thanks in advance

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