I just competed introduction about this community. Please let me know what you all think. I decided not to create a video at this time. Critique to add or subtract if you feel led. All is appreciated

I find myself unable to build this community resources like I really want with just creating art as the focus. So I am shifting into Grief Work. I have tried to get beyond grief and loss but it is actually a living part of my being everyday. So I decided just yesterday to focus on grief work that includes creating art. The flow just came automatically and I have already created my community introduction. I just need to add videos to complete the course. I set the community to public just to attract 25 active new members and we will set it back to private. Once I complete the videos for the introduction when it is completed I will let you all know. Blessings,