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Human Review of a piece of copy.

Hello everyone 👋 I hope you are all well.

Can you please review this copy of a product description of a water bottle made for gym- goers.

Copy:

You 're killing yourself. 2 hours spent in the gym, the gains and the picture of you flexing your glutes and muscles, GONE( because of one thing) Dehydration. Drink your water with the Revive water bottle. Revive your time,gains,and flex with a bottle on the gone!

Made from recycled plastic, the Revive bottle comes in sizes such as 500ml- 2L to fit your needs.

Match your core with these colours: black,blue,pink,and grey.

Stay on track and motivated with motivational cues. You GoT this with Revive.

No bags today? Just go with the flow with the hand carry.

Don't wait till you are gone.

Drink with your water with the Revive water bottle.

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