Roast my two landing pages? (A vs B)

Praney Behl

2d (edited) • 💬 General discussion

Hey everyone, building in public and could use honest eyes from people

who actually get this space.

I'm building a white-label AI front desk that agencies resell to local

businesses. I made two completely different landing pages and I

genuinely can't pick:

A) the classic SaaS page: https://a.konvy.ai

B) a scroll story, the page plays as you scroll: https://b.konvy.ai

Not selling in this post, just asking for critique: which one would

make you keep reading, and where exactly do you drop off?

Comment A or B plus one sentence why. Brutal beats polite.

Mods: if links aren't allowed here, say the word and I'll delete or

move them to a comment.

UPDATE!

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and experiences. I collected more than 200+ feedback from various channels and it helped a ton iin making fine grained updates and polishing the experience for variant B.

I would like to explain why the variant B actually exists, I have be told by many that I try to go against the grain and challenge the safe, status quo, and force others to think differently. That is what I am trying to do here. White-label is an important feature that lets agencies built their own brand, but it IS in my opinion important to walk and understand the journey first before jumping on the pricing and features. Pricing is extremely competitive, I built the platform from scratch over the last 2 years optimised for latency, pricing and solving real problems for businesses without the fluff.

Again thank you so much for help shape this experience, I promise more to come soon.

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Roast my two landing pages? (A vs B)