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Cold Email Script Help + Feedback
Hello Guys, so in the last call I had with , & we discussed a lot of things and during that discussion I had a query that I am currently working on and needed everyone's feedback, so since everyone here is into Cold Email Scripting and has found success by trial and errors, I am sharing this document that contains the Target Audience, the Offer and the 3 Cold Email Scripts + Previews which are getting me 50%+ open rates but no responses.
I have currently targeted only 500 people and doing follow-ups (4 times), but since I am not getting results, I am planning to perform a new campaign with 1000 prospects.
My question, what should I proceed with?
- Increase the volume - Target 1000 prospects of same ICPs
- Tweak the prospects - Target agencies with 10-20 employees rather than 1-10 employees
- Tweak anything in the script (specifically offer or CTA or give something for free)
Here's the Document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K1kEr5-Ts2mcN9iPbOYdt_-9rHO_NTAhgH54wO_ah-U/edit?usp=sharing
Feel free to comment your thoughts inside the doc, and here as well. If you know someone who could help with this, feel free to share with them.
Would love to get all the people involved and improve this campaign for a case study.
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