Using LGJ's Chat GPT to create some copy. It knows all about my niche (Roofers, UK), offer (AI Automation for sales, ops, marketing) and end goal (book a call or a 14 day trial). Would love some feedback. 3 pages. 1st example - I have their First Name. 2nd example - I dont have their name (from my data, can be hard to find for niche, not on LinkedIn). https://docs.google.com/document/d/1j_tYpCRIcCd5CRNnUVJOTcC0C0zI_BuhCupXZSQwRu8/edit?usp=sharing Thanks!

here's the link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dpShffKP-bLwdGHw8wtbh0LuVlwQC0C_NfGqZYoEa7M/edit?usp=sharing appreciate any feedback.

Happy for any and all feedback on this copy for coaches in Australia. Offer: a chatbot on the coaches landing page trained on their services/philosophy that qualifies and books in leads instantly. Potentially also creating personalised lead magnets for each lead and sending to their email. The call to action is for them to reply demo or book in a meeting. My system will then create a personalised chatbot and website hosting it automatically within 30 seconds. It will then reply with the link. Then they try it, see it works and I am serious, then book a call hopefully from the page (calendar link on the page). https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EsTEtT_ZG04S8jZkZz8syAALinJvJrl04hwHv1Aw_Bw/edit?usp=sharing

@Subrat Behera's enthusiasm has rubbed-off on me and I've taken massive action this weekend. I've built a 1.1k lead list that's cleaned and double verified thanks to great ChatGPT prompting, Instantly and Million Verifier. We're ready for launch ASAP but would love some feedback on our 1st email copy before that.... ....T-minus 20 hours till launch.🚀 Here's our 1st email copy with my two different subject lines for split testing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NiaDRNmxHZ-KSPzn_PPqCSPSlC2ENuwLxEIJj3Hykms/edit?usp=sharing Any feedback is highly encouraged and appreciated. Thanks y'all! Cheers!

Hello Guys, so in the last call I had with @Grant Charge , @Ryan Magill & @Jaron Shoptaugh we discussed a lot of things and during that discussion I had a query that I am currently working on and needed everyone's feedback, so since everyone here is into Cold Email Scripting and has found success by trial and errors, I am sharing this document that contains the Target Audience, the Offer and the 3 Cold Email Scripts + Previews which are getting me 50%+ open rates but no responses. I have currently targeted only 500 people and doing follow-ups (4 times), but since I am not getting results, I am planning to perform a new campaign with 1000 prospects. My question, what should I proceed with? 1. Increase the volume - Target 1000 prospects of same ICPs 2. Tweak the prospects - Target agencies with 10-20 employees rather than 1-10 employees 3. Tweak anything in the script (specifically offer or CTA or give something for free) Here's the Document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K1kEr5-Ts2mcN9iPbOYdt_-9rHO_NTAhgH54wO_ah-U/edit?usp=sharing Feel free to comment your thoughts inside the doc, and here as well. If you know someone who could help with this, feel free to share with them. Would love to get all the people involved and improve this campaign for a case study.