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Video FB Ad

Hi guys, I'm trying with my client a new thing - a video FB ad. I have never done any and I'm not exactly sure how to structure it. I know about the parts like Hook, introduction and CTA but still..

I have written something short as a script so could you give me any feedback on it, please? It's for cosmetic service:

"After one visit to the beauty salon, it is possible to get a clean and healthy skin. This is NOT true for scientifically based reasons!

In fact, if you don't visit a beautician regularly at least once a month and don't take care of your skin at home, you will never achieve your dream look.

And why should you listen to me? My name is Pavlina Řehořová and I have taken several courses in cosmetology such as [cosmetology course].

The solution that every woman needs is a professional plan on how to take care of her skin.

Come to my salon and we will put together a customized plan created for you. Just click the "Call" button below. I'm looking forward to seeing you!"

Also what I struggle with is coming up with a proper call to action so that people would be interested in coming to the salon and actually buying the cosmetic treatment. I think that my current call to action is not what I'm looking for.

Thank you for any help!

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