ask question in the comment and stick your copy in

review it and let me know your thoughts https://docs.google.com/document/d/14lnRwEfZwL4RvBNjKa4W0MUm9IWnN5syQQQkIm8Smds/edit?usp=sharing

if you are someone who is into copywriting and is for few months than read this: you are doing it right but here is what you are missing out on negotiation , communication, expression of emotion to work on these you have to see can you really talk or explain the whole product or service in 2 lines if yes then great make it to 1 if not then try again and again that's it but if you have come this far then here is one practice for you review this email and try to rewrite it make sure to add it in comments https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KLcKcw9NQ6ctMzpASGp-OS8PxnMuUWLnhgzcI0nHLNo/edit?usp=sharing keep going there's no way to give up

HERE IS THE RAW TRUTH IF YOU ARE SOMEONE WHO IS IN COPYWRITING FOR A LONG TIME AND DOSENT HAVE ANY CLIENTS THE REASON IS YOU ARE JUST NOT DOING THR RIGHT THING YOU ARE JUST DOING THE SKILL COPYWRITING BUT YOUR OUTREACH IS SUCH BAD EVEN AFTER WATCHING EVERY VID ABOUT IT SO THE ADVISE IS GET GOOD AT NEGOTIATION HERES ONE OF MY EXAMPLE OF HOW I DID THE RIGHT THING AND JUST WROTE THIS EMAIL IN 3 MIN https://docs.google.com/document/d/1irxHBv_6tJTi7FcTQBi_4L1dF5tjaM9vuRBCnG6S6so/edit?usp=sharing

this took me almost 9 months but ill give you in 1 minutes its not about finding the right structure its all about how you use sales and put yourself in the shoes of reader and then right words heres one example https://docs.google.com/document/d/15ojKoqjZVLL-8vDHOSrfbVPrySqqgnzHdJBEIOPBzPg/edit?usp=sharing