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Reviewing copy for the health&fitness niche ONLY
I'll review your copy ASAP. Drop 1 copy per person. Don't forget to like.
0 likes β€’ Jul '24
@Vks Parky really good email. I would change 1 thing: Add a result of what that diet was able to help you accomplish. Example: I am giving you access to the exact diet plan that is in my course called β€œRipped recipes” that helped me gain 5kgs of pure muscle mass in 3months.
0 likes β€’ Aug '24
@Shashi Kashyap βœ…
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT: DO NOT CREATE NEW POSTS OR THREADS IN OTHER CHATS ASKING PEOPLE TO SUBMIT THEIR COPY. YOU WILL GET BANNED. WE KEEP THINGS ORGANIZED. From now on, Every week or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
0 likes β€’ Jul '24
@Santi Fuenzalida just gave you some feedback, hope it helps (don't forget to like, thanks)
0 likes β€’ Jul '24
Newsletter email, Fitness niche: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PkRxNzT4c618vDNIG77MJCxNxiJH96xITz9rUd6HquI/edit?usp=sharing
AIDA email structure copy please anyone review it
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ryC1ZkCC0xSpvrMaAKPNz3nDRyQdq3vWaF9HdBJ7EEU/edit?usp=sharing
1 like β€’ Jul '24
added some comments + suggestions. hope they help. don't forget to like thanks!
0 likes β€’ Jul '24
@Angshuman Bhuyan done brother πŸ‘
Can anyone pls review my copy and rate it out of 10
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a1LOGqtjTWQ4qklu7RHH6ys6z9foqzOf7QLB9ii_lmg/edit pls give feedback
1 like β€’ Jul '24
I would say the main issue with this copy is the lack of flow and the grammar sometimes doesn't make much sense so I would highly recommend you re-reading this piece of copy OUT LOUD and identifying, which parts don't flow smoothly and don't make much sense and re-writing those.
Sales page copy review - Fitness niche
hi guys, 2 things: 1. Would really appreciate some feedback on this sales page: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rGzSEkQH0PkzD5itfG_e0DaZvK1lEE2LiFtbDOZggaU/edit 2. Is it a good idea to cold outreach by giving away a free sales page? I was thinking something like this as a DM: About {product} I noticed your sales page for your calisthenics program, and I think that with better wording, you could get even more engagement and conversions. (Not trying to criticize) I've written a new copy for your sales page and would love for you to check it out: {link} All I ask from you is feedback on how it performs if you decide to use it. Let me know, Virgile
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Virgile Langermann
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