Jul '24 • 💬 General
Sales page copy review - Fitness niche
hi guys, 2 things:
- Would really appreciate some feedback on this sales page:
2. Is it a good idea to cold outreach by giving away a free sales page?
I was thinking something like this as a DM:
About {product}
I noticed your sales page for your calisthenics program, and I think that with better wording, you could get even more engagement and conversions. (Not trying to criticize)
I've written a new copy for your sales page and would love for you to check it out:
{link}
All I ask from you is feedback on how it performs if you decide to use it.
Let me know,
Virgile
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