Here's my first one sheet for it, revised log line, and tag line. HOSTILE HEARTS by Freddy L Robinson Logline: After a routine heart surgery, a middle-aged Black man unknowingly becomes a billion-dollar target when his surgeon hides stolen espionage secrets inside his new mechanical heart valve. Tag Line: “One man’s heart holds the key to global chaos.” NOTE: The more I learn from my doctors, the more information I'll be able to plug into the Scriptmatix tools for story development, characters, et cetera.

I know the scenes could probably be tighter, but there’s a delicate balance between writing thin versus dense. Right now, they lean a bit dense, but that’s intentional. It’s always easier to trim things down later than to build them up from nothing. Would love to hear your thoughts!

I am just flipping randomly through the script that was generated. I came across a huge block of text. Here's a big chunk: Her voice trails off into silence filled only by distant city sounds—the hum of life indifferent to personal upheaval unfolding on this small stage. Frankenbeuhler reaches out tentatively—a reassuring hand resting lightly on her shoulder—a gesture both grounding and comforting amidst internal chaos threatening coherence itself if allowed free reign unchecked by reason or restraint alike either way somehow anyway finally maybe someday soon hopefully eventually somehow someway someday... FRANKENBEUHLER Whatever it is... you’re not alone in this. His words weave through confusion like threads binding disparate parts together again anew once more perhaps possibly maybe someday soon eventually hopefully finally ultimately ultimately ultimately... Simka meets his gaze briefly before looking away again—lost within thoughts swirling around encounters past present future potentialities possibilities probabilities uncertainties certainties hopes fears dreams nightmares realities truths lies loves losses gains triumphs failures successes challenges opportunities risks rewards consequences outcomes beginnings endings cycles circles spirals loops whorls eddies currents tides waves surges flows ebbs rises falls peaks troughs highs lows ins outs ups downs sideways backwards forwards diagonally vertically horizontally laterally longitudinally latitudinally temporally spatially dimensionally eternally infinitely finitely finitely finitely finitely finitely... And I thought my stream of consciousness style of writing prose was difficult to follow.

I broke my story into 14 small chapters to follow my main character's strange journey in this arthouse/horror script. I've tried the traditional three-act structure a few times, but ended up going with chapters when I started working on the outline again earlier today. The changes made to scriptmatix helped me pick what works best. I really love Creative Mode because it gave me some great ideas, which I ended up using some when I switched to FS-Control Mode. Great updates to the models.

Which Model Menu do you like best, A or B? A: Makes you choose the type of project you want to create, then displays models only for that type of project. B: Yesterday's winning option displays all models separated by categories.