I just wrote a Facebook ad script would love to hear any thoughts and suggestions on how to improve it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GPMP9kk7ULEeY2_9ghvMMKvhuRxSnlhI-gcNSfy11hY/edit?usp=sharing
I've been trying to land clients for some time and I've gotten a few testimonials in a there but nothing major. If you were in my shoes what's steps would you take.
Can I get any feedback on this ad script Im working on? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RtfaJOpaTVD-YaQLpznt8JzLVPeTBfAZAE0rrwHQlUE/edit?usp=sharing