What platform do you use to create landing pages?

Can someone take a quick look at my profile and let me know what stands out, what feels unclear, and what I can improve to make it more appealing to potential clients? https://www.instagram.com/writes.shivam_/

Stop asking for reviews from other people who probably don't know what they're doing. (Blind leading the blind) ALL you have to do is subscribe to a big creator/influencers newsletter, or an email list you know is converting well And look at how they write emails. Copy their style, study them. How the ctas seamlessly flow, the way they write their subject lines, Their angles, whatever. And write your own based off them. And if your email doesn't read off like the sum of atleast 3 of them, it's probably not that great. Doing this also makes sure you learn to copy brand voices easily, which is what clients want second to money. Easy. I stopped doing reviews a long time ago because they literally got me nowhere, I just subscribed to 20 newsletters and I've never run out of email ideas since. Oh, and bonus tip: Stop using those dumb em dashes (this—garbage) its INSANELY obvious you used ai when you keep those in your copy because ONLY AI uses those. You can't even type them out with your keyboard. I had to search for this crap When you read a lot of AI shit over time, you can also just tell if something is written with it. Most of these entrepreneurs and content creators probably use AI on a day to day basis too. They can definitely tell So why would they pay you money for the same quality of email that chatgpt can create for them? Hope this helps brah

Here it is : https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1f6I-ZwwXKqqZDTRG3Zh16Ujk5NjB3uXNMRln4tluHCA/edit

I'll make sure to review it within 24h( no cap) And I'd really appreciate if you guys review this to me https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bfDS9kOaRtmuu_42aWBUyxVjKmmrv57LIUPLv3ml2uw/edit?usp=sharing