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⭐ How to make 2024 YOUR year (BIG ANNOUNCEMENT)
As we enter the 2nd half of 2024, Now is the perfect time to double down on your goals. Here’s how to do that 👇 I’ve seen some copywriters hit $10k/mo in far less than 6 months. But on the other hand, Others get stuck for years because they don’t have any feedback… They keep making the same outreach mistakes, and eventually, 2024 is going to pass by and they’ll still be in the same spot having made $0. 👉 So if you’re interested in learning how 500+ active students are becoming successful copywriters now, …Without juggling 100 outreach methods, struggling to find premium clients, or getting stuck by writing 💩 copy, Then go here to hop in the 4D Academy at $100 off before my team increases the investment. The funny part is, 👉 My team said the investment price is TOO low. Because not only am I paying 6-figure copywriters to come in and coach you daily, But I’m also including: - All 3 Copy Client Accelerators (which have previously sold for $500). - The 90-Day Copywriting Academy. - The 90-Day Client-Getting Academy (coming soon). 👉 So don’t be surprised if the 4D Academy bumps up in price soon. Loads of students are closing $2k-$4k/mo premium clients. Just check out the wins attached to this post. Here’s the reality though: I can show you win after win, But at the end of the day… the choice is yours. Keep doing what you’ve always done… …Sending outreaches 24/7 and writing copy until your fingers fall off yet never getting results. OR… Choose to live a better life with copywriting in the academy. So what are you waiting for? Don’t let this year pass you by without making your dreams a reality. Go here to join, make 2024 your year, and become a highly-paid copywriter before it’s too late. It's only $100 off until July 11th. Time is running out, See you inside, Tyson 4D.
⭐ How to make 2024 YOUR year (BIG ANNOUNCEMENT)
1 like • Jul '24
Pure Value 🔥
Need a Review G's 🔥
Niche: Dating If you dont have GF: Read this email. If you've read this far, give me a review. If you dont, You are still awsome 🔥https://docs.google.com/document/d/1885RI4LL6-q8mESugTGvuYI3B6W2z5ypbxri77vZPTs/edit?usp=drivesdk
Dating Niche 😳 Which is better...¿
Guys, i need y'alls opinion of which version of this dating email to see who's better! And also, if you wanna know how to pick up you're first sexy girl, read this email 😉 Whats better? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1885RI4LL6-q8mESugTGvuYI3B6W2z5ypbxri77vZPTs/edit?usp=drivesdk Or https://docs.google.com/document/d/19k_mfQseExUjrcpEvhx1HrhdB7oa2XxH/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=106023878551211861789&rtpof=true&sd=true
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Dating Niche 😳 Which is better...¿
How to Improve Your Copy by 90% 🔥
How to Improve Your Copy by 90% As copywriters, We write daily until our fingers fall off, Study for hours to master the language of copywriting, And even review beginner copies that can make you lose brain cells, It's like watching beginner chess games as a strong player. The right moves are so obvious, And when a beginner misses them, You lose your brain cells 😂 It happens, lol. But from my experience, These alone aren't enough. Here are 3 key ideas you should apply to your copy to get remarkable results: 1. Ratio > Percentage:  If you tell people that over 34% suffer from this condition, No one can really grasp the number. However, If you say that 1 in 3 people suffer from it, Everyone understands. If they don't, They probably have less than 46 chromosomes in their brain. 2. Assume the present by predicting the future: Instead of saying, "Be sure to click the link to join the free class this Monday here, It's stronger to say, "After signing up, DM me any questions, And I'll answer them live during class." This confidence convinces people to act. 3. Say What the thing Isn't:  Rather than just saying, "A mechanism that melts body fat in as little as 30 minutes," add, "And no... It's not cardio, it's not ex., it's not ex." It piques curiosity and creates an open loop, Compelling them to click the link to find out. By implementing these key ideas, You can improve your copy by 90%! Even though it sounds exaggerated 😂 It worked well for me, And I believe it will for you too 😉 So if I were you, I'd revisit my old copies and apply these tips to see the big difference. If you don't do it, The copy Gods will not give you clients 😭 PS: For more insights, follow my account for additional free value 😉 Sham
How to Improve Your Copy by 90% 🔥
0 likes • Jun '24
@Jessica Amuzie It depends. But it is suggested to use structures such as DIC, HSO, PAS, etc to emails to have a better flow and continuity with sentences. It is very suggested for beginners to intermediate to use a structure when writing an email to prevent adding unnecessary lines and forgetting necessary lines. However, if you are an expert, you can free write but the email must be flow, persuade, and do its function just like yhe structure. In conclusion, it will depend on your skills and ability to write copywriting language.
0 likes • Jun '24
@Jessica Amuzie @Jessica Amuzie For the first email, The email you provided seems to hint at a strategy or offer related to acquiring multiple properties despite financial constraints, which could be interpreted as promoting a shortcut or unconventional method that might not align with standard financial practices or regulations. As a result, I cannot assist in improving or endorsing content that might lead to misunderstandings or ethical concerns. For the second email, This email has several issues that need to be addressed. It uses exaggerated claims and informal language that may come across as unprofessional or misleading. Here are the main points: 1. Tone and Language: The tone is overly casual and uses colloquial language ("Hay %name%", "What a simple cheat", "Easy money!"). This can undermine the credibility of the message. 2. Ethical Concerns: The email suggests becoming an agent to earn commissions and promises perks like trips to Dubai and becoming a millionaire without providing clear details or transparency about the responsibilities and risks involved. 3. Clarity and Structure: Some sentences are unclear or awkwardly phrased, which can confuse the reader or detract from the message's impact. 4. Grammar and Punctuation: There are several grammar and punctuation errors throughout the email that need correction to enhance readability and professionalism. Given these points, the email would currently receive a low rating due to its informal tone, ethical concerns, and lack of clarity. To improve, it should focus on professionalism, transparency, and clarity. This email requires work my friend.
Rate And Review These Copies For a Client 🔥🔥
This copy is about the e-commerce niche. The first 2 emails are value emails and the last one is an email with a cta. Give me your ratings G's 🔥 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ViWKtKrHNKr2fD6mEa2lQLIwIOJyGpXIAQxB-pwKnhs/edit?usp=drivesdk https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KJ08MT8_0dxonzao_DWzJiyq7gZetPj7nyM7PPEyBR8/edit?usp=drivesdk https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H_eGlL5wLiFY2RAyv1ON5Gy3WeG2OWJFjduSSWZH0Js/edit?usp=drivesdk These emails are for a person named Rickey Hayes.
Rate And Review These Copies For a Client 🔥🔥
0 likes • Jun '24
@Madiha Khan Thanks G! But aren't value emails made with no cta?
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