@Gilbert Gilbert decent, but it needs a call to action. It just looks like a PSA 😂. There needs to be an email back or something

@Riley Buttery don’t write the price in, I like the idea of the shock they accidentally purchased is smart, but do it differently

@Talha Mukhtiar I like the ending a lot, “to your success”. Other than that(remember I’m a beginner) it does seem a basic. Like the words imagine and stuff like that

@Kristiano Pro some of the grammar is off, other than that it’s good. Add some emojis to the things you should and shouldn’t do. ✅❌. Just run it through grammarly