@Leon Ros Hope you'll close him soon

@Rease Marshall so short for a landing page Subject copy is good but add a few more elements like testimonials and encourage their dreams. Can't comment cuz obviously I don't have a canva account But try to add a few more scroll stoppers like 'Meet your instructor What my students said'

@Alifa Ormin Ritu opener?

A have all of the things in my notes but here's what you need the most: . Welcome Email Purpose: First hello, build trust, set expectations. Power Words: exclusive, free, inside, thank you Openers: “Welcome aboard, [Name]!”, “You’re in! Here’s what to expect…” Example Subject: Welcome to the family 🎉 Example Body: Hi [Name], thanks for joining us! As a gift, here’s 10% OFF your first order. Stay tuned for insider tips. Closers: Excited to start this journey with you, / Talk soon, . Welcome Sequence What it does: Greets someone who just signed up. Email 1: “Hi! Welcome aboard!” Email 2: “Let me show you around.” Email 3: “Here’s a cool tip just for you.” Goal: Make the new friend feel happy and warm.

Hook are usually welcoming and greeting to the new subscribers.

@Guru Gaikwad He wants you to cut your existing email into 2 equal parts. That way it become wayyy to shorter to read and review. As I said, it's so long and consider giving him the 2nd half of the email cuz I haven't reviewed it yet..

@Kyle Scott scam?

@Yander Morgen First draft is often crappy honestly but try pushing harder next time 💪