@Yaya Reed 👋 I went through the whole page now, and there’s a strong emotional idea running through it. -- ✅ What I’d keep: “Stop shrinking & start showing up.” That’s clear, memorable, and much stronger than simply promising “more confidence.” You also do a good job naming moments the right woman can recognize: holding back in a room she belongs in saying yes when she really means no watching someone else go after what she wanted Those specifics make the problem feel real. And I especially like: “stop performing confidence and start living it.” That gives Slay Society a more interesting point of view than another generic confidence group. -- 🔎 What I’d test first: Make the after-state more specific. Right now I understand who she is and what she’s tired of, but the destination becomes quite broad: “showing up in every aspect of their life: career, relationships, family, etc.” I’d test narrowing that into a few concrete changes she can picture. For example: Speak up when you have something to say. Set boundaries without guilt. Go after opportunities you would normally talk yourself out of. Not necessarily those exact words, but something that lets her think: “Yes - that’s what showing up would actually look like in my life.” For a paid community, I’d also make sure the visuals eventually give visitors some tangible proof of the experience inside - and your personal video can work nicely as that final deeper-trust tile after they’ve scanned the clearer visual story first. -- Your full interactive Audit - covering all 15 Copy + Visual checks in much more detail - and your personalized PAP (Personal Audit Page) will be waiting for you inside the free Standard tier of 🧭 OBB1 Community Navigator. Welcome 👉 https://www.skool.com/navigator You already make the pain easy to recognize - I’d mainly make the woman she becomes just as easy to picture. 🐬

@Jennifer Rassbach really glad it was useful, Jennifer 😊 And yes - I think the core message is already strong. Making the WHO easier to recognize should help the rest land even faster. Your full interactive Audit goes much deeper - all 15 Copy + Visual checks in much more detail, plus your personalized PAP (Personal Audit Page). That will be waiting for you inside the free Standard tier of 🧭 OBB1 Community Navigator. Welcome 👉 https://www.skool.com/navigator 🐬

Paul, congratulations - and I can see why this one feels different. The part that stood out to me wasn’t really the nomination itself, but what changed underneath it: from sessions and techniques > to a clearer journey people can actually recognize themselves in. After enough years in business, I’ve seen that happen more than once. Sometimes the real progress is not adding more - it’s finally seeing the pattern that was already there. And those little “again” outcomes make it very human: sleeping again driving again going out again feeling like themselves again That’s the kind of proof people understand immediately. 👏

@Paul Wren exactly - and that point about looking at what’s already there and asking “where is the evidence?” connects nicely with something I’m doing today. I’m reviewing Skool About Pages for the Bonanza and giving each owner: ✅ one thing I’d keep 🧪 one thing I’d test first Your page would be an interesting one to look at, especially now that the journey and mission have become clearer. You’re very welcome to drop DFY on my post and I’ll take a proper look. 🐬 👉 [MY BONANZA POST LINK]

Shannon, I totally agree with this. This should probably be one of the first things every Skooler gets clear on. a strategy can be excellent for one person and completely wrong for another because the niche, business model, audience, capacity, offer, and goals are different. I’ve seen people lose weeks, months, sometimes even years chasing advice that was never a good fit for where they actually were The hard part is not finding more advice. It’s knowing what you’re trying to build first - then choosing the strategy that fits that 👍

Tina, I like the way you’ve reframed the problem here. Instead of another “try harder / be more disciplined” message, you’re giving people a completely different starting point - stewardship, faith, and caring for the body from a deeper reason. that makes the offer feel less like another fitness plan and more like a change in how someone relates to their health in the first place 🙏

@Tina Brown yes - and that gives me a good reason to look at how clearly that same idea comes through on your About Page. 😊 I’m doing quick DFY About Page reviews for the Bonanza today - one thing I’d keep + one thing I’d test first. since your positioning is intentionally different from the usual “try harder” fitness message, yours would be an interesting one to review. you’re very welcome to drop DFY on my post and I’ll take a look. 🐬 👉 [BONANZA POST LINK]

Jennifer, the “What belongs in Not Yet” part stood out to me. After a few decades in business, I’ve learned that the hard part usually isn’t finding another good idea 😄 It’s deciding which good idea deserves attention now - and having the discipline to leave the rest alone for a while. I like that your Compass Check gives people a priority, not another bigger to-do list. 🧭

@Jennifer Rassbach exactly - and that “one priority, not a bigger to-do list” idea connects nicely with something I’m doing in the Bonanza today 😊 I’m personally reviewing Skool About Pages and giving each owner just: ✅ one thing I’d keep 🔎 one thing I’d test first So rather than another giant audit checklist, they get a clear place to start. since that’s very much in the spirit of your Compass Check, you’re welcome to drop DFY on my post and I’ll take a look at yours too 🐬 👉 [MY BONANZA POST LINK]