- “Work hard, be kind, and amazing things will happen.” ... - “Hard work beats talent when talent doesn't work hard.” ... - “Chop your own wood and it will warm you twice.” ... - “Work hard in silence, let success be your noise.” ... - “Nothing will work unless you do.” ... - “The big talent is persistence.”

You share your copy everyday in the community. And beg everyone to review it. But never bother to even open a single email from someone else. A little hypocritical, no? And when you're still stuck with zero clients next month, don't blame anyone or anything other than your selfish behavior. You think everything should be handed to you on a silver platter? What have you done to EARN a review of your copy? This entitled behavior isn't going to get you anywhere. And your lack of contribution isn't just hurting the community, But it directly affects your competence as a copywriter. Teaching is one of the most effective ways of learning any concept. Try dismantling what you've learnt from Tyson and explaining it step-by-step to someone else. I'm sure 90% of you can't do it. "If you can't explain it to a six year old, you don't understand it yourself." ― Albert Einstein Remember this the next time you ask for a review.

FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT: DO NOT CREATE NEW POSTS OR THREADS IN OTHER CHATS ASKING PEOPLE TO SUBMIT THEIR COPY. YOU WILL GET BANNED. WE KEEP THINGS ORGANIZED. From now on, Every Sunday I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.

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Just wrote my first ever piece of Email copy and I have gotta say it's soo fun. Please review if you get a chance https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EO7loJaiWGho3Cg4dV3z5uPmeXF9ekR4rPtEw-Te8yI/edit?usp=drivesdk