Some people don't like harsh tones If that's you, like this post and I'll review your copy No matter how crappy it is And I'll also like your comment🫢 Because you deserve it

Here you go: - Write from the scar, not the wound. Tap into real, healed experience; it brings grounded truth, not raw emotion. - Don’t just describe; transfer emotion. Great copy makes people feel something they can’t ignore. - Let the reader discover themselves. Guide them so they arrive at the insight; don’t spoon-feed it. - Show transformation in motion. Use micro-stories and before/after moments to paint change. - Make invisible benefits visible. Sell not just the thing, but the life it gives (confidence, ease, peace, joy). - Use contrast to create clarity. “From this ➝ to this” snaps attention and shows value fast. - The pause is power. Short lines. Punchy breaks. Let thoughts breathe. Rhythm matters. - Speak like someone they trust. Match their tone, cadence, and slang so it feels like a friend wrote it. - Create internal nods. When they read and silently go, “That’s exactly me,” you’ve won. - Don’t sell; serve. Come from the mindset of helping, not closing. It shifts everything.

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I quit copywriting for a different (and better) beginner business model. But this isn’t a new thing… I quit copywriting a LONG time ago. And so have all of my successful students. If you’re not shifting to this new model, you’re already behind. So, click below to see why I quit copywriting (and changed to something better). https://youtu.be/b_rZwtkp-2Y Watch the full video before commenting. See you there! Tyson 4D.

Can anyone review my copy? Any suggestion is appreciated. Rate it out of 10 for my personal evaluation. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M9PYB-zgy-14tdwSkRBcfSP2fq5UcalV3J22lXVPSjw/edit?usp=sharing