@Itqon Askary Im only just starting and im focusing on writing copy, so im not sure where the person would get their email from and im writing as if the business is new. So the purpose of the email is to get them to click the link, which would then take them to the website of the business. I was going for the idea that the person reading may be bored of going to the gym and is looking for a something different. Do you get where im coming from? If not can u provide feedback? Thanks