May I get suggestions regarding how to improve English language skills (all skills reading, writing, speaking and listening) Particularly correct the Sentences?

I am Zain ,here to learn something new so anyone here can guide me about this skool community

A new freelancer often lacks confidence and experience. Getting the first client is difficult because of high competition. They don’t know how to set prices, don’t have a portfolio, and feel afraid to talk to clients. Rejections cause demotivation, time management becomes hard, and there is also a risk of fake clients or scams. In simple worlds; Bhaio or behno yeh saab daar mujhy bhi lagty han or yeh saab cheze main bhi sochta hon or har banda jo new new is field mian aa raha ha Likn in saab chezo ka haal haroon bhai ki lectures main ha So here is my humble advice to everyone who is getting started with this community or any other please stay consistent. This is the only key to open the doors. Jazak allah! Peace out!

Just joined the Skool community after watching some videos of @Haroon Khalil bhai on Instagram. I am truly amazed to see so much knowledge in one place and a community full of amazing people. 𝐋𝐞𝐭 𝐦𝐞 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨𝐝𝐮𝐜𝐞 𝐦𝐲𝐬𝐞𝐥𝐟 𝐟𝐢𝐫𝐬𝐭 My name is Abdullah Javaid, and I have been working as an Amazon Strategist since 2021. I started my journey by watching YouTube videos on my mobile because I did not have a laptop or the money to buy one at that time. But passion is qadr tha k yakeen tha Allah koi sbab bnae ga. After 8 months of consistent learning, I found my first client through Facebook, and from that time until today, I have not seen a single month in my life without earning. Alhamdulillah. However, due to my own negligence, bad habita and laziness, I lost my mental state and went through overthinking, anxiety, and depression, which led to burnout and exhaustion. The work I love to do has now become a headache, but still Alhamdulillah, because I am trying to recover from it. Acha guman, or acha sochne ki koshish kr rha hu. Praying 5 times a day, Tahajjud. 𝐏𝐮𝐫𝐩𝐨𝐬𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐉𝐨𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐓𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐮𝐧𝐢𝐭𝐲 1. Learn Upwork skills: I have Rising Talent status and one ongoing project on Upwork, but I am not finding the right way to grow on it. Mtlb passion ni ban paa rha. 2. Gain as much knowledge as I can 3. Share my thoughts and seek advice from professionals 4. I am seeing the daily journals of members, which is very inspiring. I will definitely share my own as well.

Aoa, everyone I can't post anything because of an accident happened today. Really appreciate if you remember me in your prayers. Jazak allah !