I never thought I'd say this but you're doing it too much. I mean you put too much power (it's supposed to be good ik but nvm). The song has a pretty chill vibe, so you can follow that more, and just accentuate a few movements, not the whole dance. Also, by using that much power, since it doesn't fit the song it makes the moves messy

Yesssss ma'am

@Havilah K awww thanks you too if you auditioned!!!!

Try to really give it more power. And maybe also try exaggerating it! Except for that it's good

Oh damnnnnn that's a massive slayyyyy!!!! But maybe, if you really want something to improve, you can maybe make changes in texture and power? It could grab even more attention, but that's just a tiny detail

@Yasmin Rihad that's okay, but you can try to put some mask on maybe? Also I agree with others, I watched it without sound and I couldn't know if you were dancing or singing, so try to really focus on movements, take it slow and then speed up