When it's saying "I'mma run it" I would say but more energy when you walking back, like move with your whole body (I'm not sure if you would understand sorry😭) Most of your moves are clean, BUT I think you could add in some power and sharpness in some parts. I feel like you were thinking about the move when you went down, so I would say when you do that move don't think about it too much and add a little head tilt. Sometimes your upperbody is stiff. And you have a bit of disconnected pauses Otherwise you did actually awesome. I think if you auditioned for JYP like a survival show he could probably pick you because you have potential