Hi guys this Is a video of me rapping can you give feedback to it

Guys let's plan something when everyone's online maybe fix a date and day most probably Sunday... I'm thinking of something like yk forming groups and once a week we'll yk post covers and let's keep a track of who wins every week and things like that,like train in your own way but yk it's like testing yourself otherwise we can do it individually too. What do you say guyzz?

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I sang the hunger games version of keep on the sunny side, feedback please. (Don’t mind the text on the video, most of it is in my language).

I got the mirrored dance practice for this song, so you can dance to it