https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D14iCuT3rtyqptjKZsxnaxhKoae5PL1_JZurXNFuRgg/edit?usp=sharing

I'll review yours a lil later i needa study for a test

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D14iCuT3rtyqptjKZsxnaxhKoae5PL1_JZurXNFuRgg/edit?usp=sharing

Your sales page is good, 7.5/10 Maybe get into detail with the contents of the book but not too much Make them have a fear of missing out by listing the people that benefited using this book "If they can do it.. why can't I?" Type of thing

Good play on words with "Are you ready to salesuade yourself into fortune" Thats really creative

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14HnB9lPXzirySCAP3DVB6dsFb0DIraVN-JKwsMPBtkE/edit?usp=sharing

You should'nt have quit joseph, you wasted 6 whole months who knew what could have happened in those 6 months You could have had a high quality client You could have insanely improved your copy But here you are, in the same place you were 6 months ago Many people go months without clients,(I have aswell, its been a month and a few days into copywriting Had afew clients ghost me, had countless "not interested" I even had doubts about copywriting like you have Joseph, but here's the thing.. I never quit. I know if I outreach consistently I will get a client but here's the catch... Only YOU can make that choice on whether to continue copywriting or not Unfortunately there is not magic formula to getting clients, you have to put in the work Outreaching, Writing emails, Landing pages etc.. The choice is yours Joseph, Do you want to be the "Copy Tourists" Tyson has been talking about or do you want to make a living through copywriting I know my answer my brother.... But do you?

Damn bro I'm sorry for your loss That must have been really hard for you I'm glad you back into copywriting though bro