A few pointers : How does a thumbnail give you motivation? Like if I'm a client and I read that, I'm like: Wtf is he on about?? You get what I mean? If the videos give you motivation, then that's actually believable. So I would just, say something like: You know that (specific video name), the way you xxx in the xx line, that gave me motivation. But I noticed you're not using xxx tools that can xxx xx So I just made this quick xx video showing you why these tools are super effective and how to use them so you can (outcome) Here's the video: I would make it like this. Shows them you've actually watched their content. You took time to make a personalized video for them You know what they're really missing out and the outcome that they want. My version is just an example as well, just to give you the format.
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