I wrote a promo email for the first time and I'd appreciate if you guys could lmk how to improve. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pxgIyHv-VUUOP6pZ_QHArW1j-PXb72SOC1YQj2LUyfo/edit?usp=sharing

"Those who act only on motivation rather than discipline deserve to stay exactly where they are" ~ unknown

Copywriting is an incredible skill, you know? You can use it to make a living, To apply it in real life, to convince your loved ones about an idea, And also to help others do exactly the same. But if your current goal is to make money with it, You must master these two skills: EMAIL MARKETING AUTOMATION Writing an email is one thing, but knowing how to send them effectively is another. Mastering this skill will help your client save money and allow you to charge higher rates. It’s a skill that sets you apart from the competition and makes you unique. TOP. FUNNEL BUILDING After all, your audience won’t read your copy in your Google Doc. :( Your client needs a funnel builder to showcase your copy. LOL Now, imagine that you are that funnel builder! Your client will have found a collaborator, not just a Copywriter. YOU BECOME IRREPLACEABLE. Your client will never want to replace you because hiring someone specialized in automation and another for funnel building Would slow down their business. But with you, the team is complete. I hope this opened your eyes to the importance of learning these two skills. Your friend, Pierre — Passionate Copywriter

“There is no expedient to which a man will not go to avoid the labor of thinking.” No customer wants to think while reading an ad. Do the thinking for them through evidence: facts, statistics, studies, graphs, videos, quotes, etc.!

This ice cream is available at Aldi for a limited-time only btw. What do you notice about this food ‘article?’ (more like a vague advertisement tbh.) Lmk, id like to hear your response in the comments down below Peace 🕊️