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I love reading ever since I was a child. As a result, I developed an imaginative mind. At school, I became a creative writer. Poetry, short stories, plays, essays, etc. Top marks. Everyone starts to listen when I read my writings. That's why I SUCK, at copywriting. I love the fluff, I love the words! The beauty and the magic. The way it makes me feel. All of that I have to forget. It's like letting go of a part of me and starting all over again. I have to say goodbye to the identity I created to get my degree. And develop a new persona to reach self-actualization. Anyone else shifting identities here?⬇️

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