I just wondering if I have included too much into it & it could create more issues than it's worth? Please provide your thoughts on how I have structured it. I plan on trying in the PIA software that Mark is providing 2000 credits in which we can go for a spin in that app!

Is there anyone out there right now? I have misplaced my contact info regarding contacting Mark Diaz via email. If someone would forward it to me or post it; that would be great. If there is a better way , also inform me.

I know first off that I need to clean up the track a bit with crackles & such. My question is other than that is the voice ok to use or should I look for a more expressive exciting type voice. I didn't want to over hype the story line too much; thoughts form everyone?

Here is the script: Please give suggestions on how to improve on the entire project. I'm running behind a bit; I realize but have been loaded down with burning the candle at both ends. Please advise with any suggestion. This is my first attempt at doing anything AI.