Hello guys I just finished my 15th ever written practice copy. I used CJN template with some minor changes. If you could review it and tell me what I did wrong or good, and rate it from 1-10 it would mean a world to me. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fUtKBZeBUNx2n2X01WaliPkuma-ot2TRASTDSnqVrjw/edit?usp=sharing

Getting ghosted everytime? This is probably THE MOST COMMON challenge EVERY copywriter faces. You take 15-30 mins creating the "perfect" Dm, You post it on the discord server for critique, Then you send out the DM..... only to be left on seen. If there's anything I know about business owners (and human beings in general) ...It is that they are INCREDIBLY selfish. And if it doesn't benefit them in any way, they'll ghost you without a second thought. So if you want to get a 6/10 response rate, Then pay close attention. By now you've already gone through Tyson's videos where he talks about different outreach methods, And while he says there's no GOLDEN outreach method, The best by far in getting prospects attention without spending hours thinking, ....is the inquiry Dm method (part of the bait and rizz actually), Here's a screenshot of a prospect who replied to my DM outreach, It wasn't up to a minute when I got a notification from her. This is because every business owner wants to make more money, ....and will rush when the opportunity presents itself. So while you're outreaching, be sure to test out the inquiry Dm method. Ask them a question about whatever it is they're selling. Once you've gotten a response, leave it to marinate for 2-3 days before going through the steps of warming up the prospect. That's all for now, Let's get the bag 💰 💰 ========= P.S. Like and follow to get notified whenever I drop off value bombs on this platform (which you can save for later). ========= P.S.S. If Instagram is your thing, connect with me here 👇 https://www.instagram.com/the_marketing_g?igsh=YmpkcmgzZThrZGY4

(WARNING ⚠️ 5 mins read) I probably should have said this long ago, But if you're fed up of pouring your heart and soul into this copywriting game with nothing to show, Then read this to the end. Currently, we're just 5 months from 2025, And you probably haven't gotten any results, No cash. No clients. No sales calls. NOTHING. Pretty sad huh 😔, I want you to understand that... You're on a battle ground against 100k+ wannabe copywriters, And you can't defeat an armed killer with KungFu (Don't even think about it) What will separate you from the crowd is your level of skill. Because business owners can sense if you're good or not. That's why I want to help you get better by giving you powerful copywriting ammunition to become a sought-after copywriter. Here's what you get today: - 15 psychology concepts to create persuasive copies that print money. - 50 copywriting hooks to SEIZE your reader's attention effortlessly. - The SPECIFIC AI tool elite copywriters use to create KILLER copies that command sales at will. - Daily copy and outreach review for 7 days to level up your copywriting game. Now you may be wondering, "Emmanuel, why give all this away for free?" And you're right, That's why I'll be giving you EVERYTHING for...... .....Wait for it.... In exchange for a testimonial, That's it. No upsells, down sells or strings attached (pssst....I ain't got shit to sell 😅) And here's the thing, You only get to drop a testimonial IF your copywriting improves at the end of these 7 days. Unfortunately.... I'll be taking ONLY 10 spots, So if you want to grab these resources PLUS get daily critique. Then drop me a DM on Instagram with the word "Let's get the bag" https://www.instagram.com/the_marketing_g?igsh=YmpkcmgzZThrZGY4 >>> SIDE NOTE <<< I will NOT be reviewing copies in this community to avoid getting BANNED 🚫 Once the 10 spots are taken...this message will disappear forever and ever....and ever (pooof)

And why you should do the same. Just kidding 😅 But I did actually design an email for the dropshipping niche. Let me know your thoughts 👇 I'm open to corrections 🎯 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iXqq6yWZez4EBm0wWmLYLnPZ5mPHPwolj9v39l5qW_o/edit?usp=drivesdk

FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT: DO NOT CREATE NEW POSTS OR THREADS IN OTHER CHATS ASKING PEOPLE TO SUBMIT THEIR COPY. YOU WILL GET BANNED. WE KEEP THINGS ORGANIZED. From now on, Every week or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.