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Please review this ad (and I'll review yours)
Hey future millionaires, I need 3 mins of your time. I need an honest review on the ad creatives I made for a nutrition brand in the health niche (testosterone optimization for men). The market research is there for context (you'd have to scroll down a bit though) Here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ufpXCHZCgcPjjyTh8IfndGD4uI9paMiVvpRZKFZPp9E/edit?usp=drivesdk Thank you in advance 🙂 P.S. Drop yours so I'll return the favour.
1 like • 12d
@Lucass Doe Just a few spelling and structure errors. Use Grammarly to correct the spelling. Add a subject line. I've made some corrections but try to review the copy with fresh eyes. Overall, nice work bro 👍.
Not for persons under 18 🔞
You stayed? That's quite bold of you young chap (British accent). Well... if you insist. The following request will probably take 3mins of your time. I'm in need of some critique on this sales copy I wrote for a multi-million dollar company. I've attached the target avatar and angle of the copy for context. (The target market info is on the 2nd tab). Thank you for your time sir 🙂. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pHWTXEawZlbpC6mRue3eDRnr41476gLQABBwqNxoLi0/edit?usp=drivesdk
Not for persons under 18 🔞
Email for a review
Hello guys I just finished my 15th ever written practice copy. I used CJN template with some minor changes. If you could review it and tell me what I did wrong or good, and rate it from 1-10 it would mean a world to me. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fUtKBZeBUNx2n2X01WaliPkuma-ot2TRASTDSnqVrjw/edit?usp=sharing
2 likes • Jul '24
Dropped off some comments and edits G. With time you need to come up with your own style instead of copying Tyson's style to the t. Hope this helps you G.
The GOLDEN outreach method that will get clients replying in minutes
Getting ghosted everytime? This is probably THE MOST COMMON challenge EVERY copywriter faces. You take 15-30 mins creating the "perfect" Dm, You post it on the discord server for critique, Then you send out the DM..... only to be left on seen. If there's anything I know about business owners (and human beings in general) ...It is that they are INCREDIBLY selfish. And if it doesn't benefit them in any way, they'll ghost you without a second thought. So if you want to get a 6/10 response rate, Then pay close attention. By now you've already gone through Tyson's videos where he talks about different outreach methods, And while he says there's no GOLDEN outreach method, The best by far in getting prospects attention without spending hours thinking, ....is the inquiry Dm method (part of the bait and rizz actually), Here's a screenshot of a prospect who replied to my DM outreach, It wasn't up to a minute when I got a notification from her. This is because every business owner wants to make more money, ....and will rush when the opportunity presents itself. So while you're outreaching, be sure to test out the inquiry Dm method. Ask them a question about whatever it is they're selling. Once you've gotten a response, leave it to marinate for 2-3 days before going through the steps of warming up the prospect. That's all for now, Let's get the bag 💰 💰 ========= P.S. Like and follow to get notified whenever I drop off value bombs on this platform (which you can save for later). ========= P.S.S. If Instagram is your thing, connect with me here 👇 https://www.instagram.com/the_marketing_g?igsh=YmpkcmgzZThrZGY4
The GOLDEN outreach method that will get clients replying in minutes
1 like • Jul '24
@Ruqaiya Arshad it's still in view mode bro. Check YouTube about how to change Google docs access from view only to commenter.
1 like • Jul '24
@Austin Casares Sorry for the delay G. The page doesn't look good. It looks like a photo ad. First thing you should do is to watch Tyson's landing page video and understand the process of creating a sales page. Secondly, I want you to search for top players in the niche and look at their page for ideas. You can check on Google or YouTube. Hope this helps you G.
Become a HIGHLY-SKILLED copywriter in 7 days
(WARNING ⚠️ 5 mins read) I probably should have said this long ago, But if you're fed up of pouring your heart and soul into this copywriting game with nothing to show, Then read this to the end. Currently, we're just 5 months from 2025, And you probably haven't gotten any results, No cash. No clients. No sales calls. NOTHING. Pretty sad huh 😔, I want you to understand that... You're on a battle ground against 100k+ wannabe copywriters, And you can't defeat an armed killer with KungFu (Don't even think about it) What will separate you from the crowd is your level of skill. Because business owners can sense if you're good or not. That's why I want to help you get better by giving you powerful copywriting ammunition to become a sought-after copywriter. Here's what you get today: - 15 psychology concepts to create persuasive copies that print money. - 50 copywriting hooks to SEIZE your reader's attention effortlessly. - The SPECIFIC AI tool elite copywriters use to create KILLER copies that command sales at will. - Daily copy and outreach review for 7 days to level up your copywriting game. Now you may be wondering, "Emmanuel, why give all this away for free?" And you're right, That's why I'll be giving you EVERYTHING for...... .....Wait for it.... In exchange for a testimonial, That's it. No upsells, down sells or strings attached (pssst....I ain't got shit to sell 😅) And here's the thing, You only get to drop a testimonial IF your copywriting improves at the end of these 7 days. Unfortunately.... I'll be taking ONLY 10 spots, So if you want to grab these resources PLUS get daily critique. Then drop me a DM on Instagram with the word "Let's get the bag" https://www.instagram.com/the_marketing_g?igsh=YmpkcmgzZThrZGY4 >>> SIDE NOTE <<< I will NOT be reviewing copies in this community to avoid getting BANNED 🚫 Once the 10 spots are taken...this message will disappear forever and ever....and ever (pooof)
Become a HIGHLY-SKILLED copywriter in 7 days
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I don't sell emails.....my emails sell.

Active 11d ago
Joined Jun 5, 2024
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