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Red flags in copywriting?
👉 Question: From @kimmm_001 “When you're editing a copy, what's one red flag that tells you the copy won't convert... Even if the writing sounds good?” 👉 Answer: Good question. Anyway, you’re speaking to Tyson 4D… Would I be me if I only gave you 1 red flag? Nahhhh, so here are a few for you to avoid: 🚩 No Emotional Hook Upfront 🚩 No WIIFM (What’s In It For Me?) 🚩 Generic/bland Storytelling 🚩 No CTA or Weak CTA 🚩 Lack of Flow or Energy 🚩 No Stakes or Tension 🚩 Spelling & Grammar Mistakes Copy can fall apart pretty quickly if the foundations aren’t in place. Focus on doing these things really well: ✅ Curiosity Upfront ✅ WIIFM (The reader needs to know why to keep reading) ✅ Immersive & Engaging Storytelling ✅ A CTA That’s Clearly The Next Logical Step ✅ Smooth Flow Between Sections ✅ Push & Pull Tension To Add Movement ✅ Easy To Read Hope this helps 💪
0 likes • Jun 6
As always you still are dropping value grenades
comeback
yoo it's been a long time haaa..? How you doing buddies ?
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1 like = 1 review
Every reactions has an equal and opposite reaction.
0 likes • Aug '24
@Isaac Rajah 7.8/ 10 keep going bro
0 likes • Aug '24
@Ahmad Copywriting All fine buddy 🥰
Your 1 like act worth a copy review.
Like the post and each and every post will be reviewed.
4 likes • Aug '24
@Siddhi Kar It needs to be imoroved more and I will rate 5/10
1 like • Aug '24
@Momin Hasnain Brother, while you are telling a story, don't talk about something else in the middle. And your mistake is yo say don't buy my course. Okay, I understand you are trying to be humble but you clearly revealing that you want them to buy. Clients understand like that bro. Also use short small catchy lines.
Drop your copy to make it best. And Don't forget to kiss the like button.
August 3rd is my weekend. So, I want to help as many friends as I can.
2 likes • Aug '24
@Siddhi Kar My pleasure
3 likes • Aug '24
@Michael V 6/10
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