๐ Question:
From @kimmm_001 โWhen you're editing a copy, what's one red flag that tells you the copy won't convert... Even if the writing sounds good?โ
๐ Answer:
Good question.
Anyway, youโre speaking to Tyson 4Dโฆ
Would I be me if I only gave you 1 red flag?
Nahhhh, so here are a few for you to avoid:
๐ฉ No Emotional Hook Upfront
๐ฉ No WIIFM (Whatโs In It For Me?)
๐ฉ Generic/bland Storytelling
๐ฉ No CTA or Weak CTA
๐ฉ Lack of Flow or Energy
๐ฉ No Stakes or Tension
๐ฉ Spelling & Grammar Mistakes
Copy can fall apart pretty quickly if the foundations arenโt in place.
Focus on doing these things really well:
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Curiosity Upfront
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WIIFM (The reader needs to know why to keep reading)
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Immersive & Engaging Storytelling
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A CTA Thatโs Clearly The Next Logical Step
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Smooth Flow Between Sections
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Push & Pull Tension To Add Movement
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Easy To Read
Hope this helps ๐ช