I'd love some feedback on my About page. I just added the testimonials. Is the music too ... cheesey? And I haven't done a proper VSL yet. Are the testimonials and Classroom screenshot enough? Would love any and all feedback, including overall impressions. Thank you!

One of the most important things I've learned since becoming an online entrepreneur is that the most important thing you can do to grow your business is to build relationships. Many of us (myself included) have rushed to promote our groups and services that we care so deeply about. And it only makes sense - we are excited about what we are doing! Today, I'd like to invite you to take a step back and introduce yourself to the group by answering the following questions: 1. Who are you personally? 2. Who are you professionally? 3. What is something you love doing outside of work? 4. What is something surprising about you? As you open up and make more connections, you will find that not only are people more interested in what you do, but they will also be more interested in helping you make connections with other people they know! 😉 After you introduce yourself, please scroll through the other introductions and add a comment to someone you have something in common with or would like to know more about. 😊 Please add your introduction in the comments below! ⬇️

I have been working on my skool about page for a few months now and think I have it the way I want it. I would like feedback to see what you think. Does it tell you what the group is about? Does it make you want to join the group? Should I change my pictures? (If so - what do you advice) Thanks for the feedback!