Nice work Glenn! - - Yes - - The mix just needs more separation — clean up some low-mids, pan things a bit wider, and pull back the overall reverb so everything isn’t washing together. . I don't think the drums should be louder — they need more separation, less reverb, and more top-end so they can cut through - - I liked when the side stick sound came in at 1:08 - it cut through nicely. For the drums , try EQ → compression → transient shaping, and pull the reverb back — the drums should open up nicely - For the vocals, Cut low-mid muddiness, boost presence around 4k, add a little top end — and pull the reverb back so the vocal sits more upfront. That was my east coast feedback . . . . my LA feedback: Nice, we'll do lunch.