@Dawn Dineen yes exactly - speak their language, communicate with them in the language that you know they’ll be searching for anyways. This shows them that you “get it/them”, can speak confidently about your sound/lane/moods and makes your email searchable even if the disco link doesn’t get saved/downloaded

@Tim Jeffcoat I like this advice but fyi I am not aware of any AI being any more accurate than disco for categorizing music fyi (in other words, very limited in terms of usability)

Hey @Jennifer Crowe ! Just finished sitting with "Benjamin" and "La La La," and I want to start by saying: these are really good songs!!!! Genuinely catchy, well-written, great bones. The ideas here are strong. What's holding them back right now is the execution, and the good news is execution is fixable. That's what I want to dig into with you. A couple of things I'm hearing across both tracks: Vocals need to be brighter and more in your face on both songs. Think about the energy Olivia Rodrigo brings on "Obsessed." A lot of that's attitude in the performance, but tactically: counterintuitively, brightness often comes from cutting, not boosting. Try a cut somewhere in the 200-500Hz low-mid range first (that's usually where "dark" and "boxy" live), before you reach for a high-shelf boost at 8k+. Boosting highs on a vocal that's already mid-heavy just makes it harsher, not brighter. Cut the mud first, then a gentle high-shelf or air-band boost (10-12k) will actually do something. Also worth checking: de-essing and a touch of upper-mid presence (3-5k) can help her cut through without sounding thin. On the recording side, this is also about source: dry room, minimal reflections, going in. A high-end mic helps (U87, C800-style), but realistically, with what you've got, the move is getting the mic closer (tighter cardioid pattern, less room bleed) and treating reflections in your space if you can (blankets, a reflection filter, whatever's available). You won't out-EQ a roomy, distant vocal take. Timing is the bigger underlying issue on both tracks, and it needs a ground-up fix. Tactically: solo the kick and snare alone first, no other elements, and check them against the grid. Quantize the downbeats if needed, or at minimum nudge anything that's drifting. Once that's locked, bring in bass next (since bass and kick need to be glued together rhythmically, that relationship matters more than almost anything else), then guitars/keys/synths on top. Build it in that order, don't try to fix everything in the full mix at once, because you won't be able to hear what's actually off.

@Troy Bennett oh gotcha, good job (had no context)

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I have basic mix notes @Tyquan Griffin but first can you let us know - do you have (or can you get access to) the stems for the beat? Did you make it or did you record this to a 2 track instrumental? What was your recording rig for vox - mic/preamp? FYI I'm asking all this because the context will help me target some things that are going to be specific based on how it was recorded and what you have access to.

@Tyquan Griffin - Here are my notes on "Gotta Get Away." Overall, I like the sound selection - especially the synths - and the vibe is there. The topic is sync-friendly too, so you've got a solid foundation to build on. Songwriting Where I think it needs work is in the balance between "showing and telling". Right now the lyrics lean too hard toward telling the listener what's happening - "I feel this, I need to do this, this is what I want." That approach puts a ceiling on how much the song can land emotionally. The best lyrics paint a picture. They drop the listener into a scene, a moment, a feeling - and let them connect the dots themselves. Think about the difference between: Telling: "I'm sad and lonely without you." Showing: "Empty chair at the table. The whole room just went quiet." Same emotion but with a completely different impact. The second one paints a scene the listener can visualize - the feeling comes through the image (shows, not the statement (tell). For your next song, go line by line and ask yourself: "Am I telling the listener something, or am I putting them in the moment?" Every time you catch yourself telling, push it one step further - give me the image, the detail, the specific thing that makes it real. Here's a quick video that breaks it down well: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YoaD1XuyOtE Mix Before you go back into this mix, I want you to do one thing first. Write down the three most important elements of this song. Just three. For a futuristic pop hip-hop track, I'd argue it's your lead vocal, your kick/bass, and your main synth. Pick one synth - there are a few in there competing for that spot right now. Once you have your three, those live front and center. Everything else - every pad, texture, shaker, and supporting element - gets turned down and built around them. That's the whole job. Right now the shaker is sitting too loud and competing with your vocal in places. That's a problem because your voice is where the emotion lives. If I can't hear you clearly, the song isn't working no matter how good everything else sounds. That's not a technical fix - it's a hierarchy decision you haven't made yet.