Hey everyone 👋 I’m refining my landing page using the one-sentence headline framework and testing both wording and color flow. My audience is women in perimenopause dealing with sleep issues, weight gain, and low energy—and I want this to feel clear, specific, and scroll-stopping. I have two versions here (attached): • One focused on sleep (2–3AM wake-ups) • One focused on weight (stubborn belly fat) Would love your honest feedback on: 👉 Which headline grabs you more immediately 👉 Which one feels clearer / more compelling 👉 If the color highlighting flows well or feels distracting 👉 If any words should be emphasized differently 👉 Anything you’d tweak to make it stronger overall Appreciate any insight—still dialing this in 🙏