Behind the behind, episode 1: Thirteen messages In my post about Behind the paper plane I promised the "behind" Behind the paper plane: the things I learned while building it. Here is the first one. It became a mini-series, made by the same ICM workspace, and this is episode 1. 4 minutes 45 seconds. Watch it on LinkedIn: https://lnkd.in/p/eYnb2vUU Behind the paper plane on LinkedIn: https://lnkd.in/p/eaYD2G-x Why the LinkedIn links: I hope you will like the posts and share them, to help me spread my name out there. You never know who sees it. THE IDEA After Behind the paper plane I wrote "Before setting it loose, I wrote Claude 13 messages." This episode checks that claim against the record, and tells what those messages were. It holds up. 13 messages about the film, 884 words in all. The finished film's narration is 1,314 words, so I wrote fewer words than the narrator speaks. One message, the picture in my head (the blueprint, the glass, the liquid chrome, the rolodex, the hidden paper planes), was 365 of them. And there were 2 corrections, not 1: - Before the film was built: the script said I make videos for clients. I do not. The record had it wrong, and one line changed. - After it was done: I watched it and thought a time on screen was missing a digit ("7:20" should be "17:20"). Looking closer, it was not one digit. The line mixed clock times from two different days with a moment from inside the film. The checks had measured every frame and found nothing broken. It still made no sense to a person. My decision: keep only what the voice says. Seven marks became three. The point of the episode: 13 messages sounds like very little. It was not. The work was done before the first message, in the folders, the rules and the record. The messages only had to point the way. HOW I KEEP MY WORDS ON SCREEN HONEST The first draft showed every word of my messages on screen. I said no: reading every word costs the viewer time for little value. So my messages are shown as bubbles sized by their length, the text blurred, with only a few short fragments readable. Those fragments are exactly what I typed, typos kept ("serius", "tribut"). Claude's answers are shown only as frosted blocks, never as words. Nothing is put in anyone's mouth.