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You understand how important hooks are in the copies you write Because if you canโ€™t hook them, they will not read and because nobody reads your copy till the end, you make no money because nobody knows the offer. 1. Challenge your target audience's beliefs. Itโ€™s a pretty obvious point. If I said you need to exercise to be healthy - that doesnโ€™t challenge your beliefs But if I said the snow is green ๐˜๐จ๐ฎโ€™๐ ๐›๐ž ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ž ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ๐š ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ๐š ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ๐š ๐ก๐จ๐ฅ๐ ๐จ๐ง ๐›๐ฎ๐๐๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐ก๐š๐ญ ๐š๐ซ๐ž ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ญ๐š๐ฅ๐ค๐ข๐ง๐  ๐š๐›๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ? Pretty sure 99% would AT LEAST read the next line And the next, and the nextโ€ฆ Obviously, you gotta make the rest of the copy make sense If you canโ€™t, then donโ€™t even use those headlines, Because it will look cringe. Use headlines that you can make sense of them 2. Pattern disrupt. Say random things that donโ€™t make sense ๐—œ ๐—บ๐—ฎ๐—ฑ๐—ฒ ๐—ณ๐—ฒ๐—ฒ๐—น๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐—ณ๐—ถ๐˜€๐—ต ๐˜๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—ป๐—ฎ๐—ฑ๐—ผ ๐˜๐—ผ ๐—ถ๐˜ Giving people the โ€œwait am I trippingโ€ feeling, hence theyโ€™re more likely to speed-read the whole post. You can do the same with emojis 3. ๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ•ท๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐ŸŒŽ๐ŸŽŠ They will try to make sense of these emojis and when they quit trying, they will read the rest of the copy to find the answer. Thatโ€™s how to get their attention What else could be used?
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Your first sentence is great as a hook on this post but the second sentence is just too long and filled with filler words, in my opinion Plus, you already gave them the solution at the start of the post by telling them why the hook is important. I get you're giving them the ways how to hook them, but at the same time, you haven't made that clear. I'd look out for these things when you write your next post man, but the bullet points are on the spot, the advice is ๐Ÿ”ฅ
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Hi to everyone, it's Alex here, a 17-year-old guy from Italy, originally from Moldova though My main focus, for now, is learning how to write better copy, especially posts since I'm a growth operator I guess one of my big advantages is that I'm very quick at taking action but also adapting to the situation I'm put in, whatever it may be So yeah, I'm happy to see what this community has got in store for me! P.S. If you didn't notice it already, yeah, I like Eminem a lot P.P.S. What's your favorite song?
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