@Phumu Thovhakale scroll stoppers are legit, but you wanna make the paragraphs more shorter

@Jenish Shah too long try to make some space between the lines, make it easy to read

@Mohammed Azizi Abdelhadi done

@Aboajela Abushawashi intriguing subject line, you make readers feel fomo with that tenant analogy, which is good, it creates urgency, I like how you used relatibility in the first line of email and in the CTA, well done bro

Here's my copy : https://docs.google.com/document/d/10ug5s8bdTfTZvXkMLWFdcwoUPF7LOPKGeQy7gsXrXIU/edit?usp=drivesdk let me know what you think, it's my first one ever

@Sanjiv Ganga well written copy, you used the (c j n) structure, the subject like was intriguing it challenged my belief, you justified by saying, it ain't all about aesthetics and I should chase a lifestyle not looks, that was a punchy line, solid copy 🔥💪, what I would recommend you is to try to craft more on your CTA, it was too short.