I got this cold DM from Ben. It’s not the worst I’ve seen, but he’s making the classic 'Service Provider' mistake: He’s leading with his numbers and his PRODUCT instead of a conversation.
Truth is, nobody wakes up and think “boy, do I hope to get invited to a strategy session today!”
Here’s the simple “trick” to make cold DMs start to click. Don’t try to “close” anyone… just open conversations.
The Challenge:
If you were Ben, and you wanted to actually GET A REPLY, without sounding like a bait and switch play…
How would you rewrite this?
Drop your 'Conversation Opener' version for Ben below. 👇👇
BONUS: If you wanna drop me one of your own examples below, you get extra bonus points!