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Guidelines for Song Share (READ THIS FIRST)
Sharing your song can be scary, so I always say, BE BRAVE AND UNAFRAID!! One of my favorite quotes is from Elisabeth Elliott -- “Sometimes when we are called to obey, the fear does not subside and we are expected to move against the fear. One must choose to do it afraid.” You're here because you have songs to share, so DO IT AFRAID!! We're here to receive and give feedback. So here are some guidelines: ▶️ Post at least a verse and chorus OR if it's a hymn, at least 2 complete verses. 🎧 Include an mp3 AND type out your lyrics in the post. 😃 Feedback should ALWAYS begin with something that you like OR an encouragement for the person who posted. It's scary enough to put your song out there, so start by building up your friends with genuine encouragement. 🪴 We're here to GROW so suggestions for improvement are not an insult to your song or your writing! 👓 Make comments that will help the person see what they aren't seeing. AND when you RECEIVE feedback, thank the person and seek to humbly put it into practice if it's helpful. 🎉 Most of all, HAVE FUN!
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On That Day - Congregational Song About Jesus Second Coming
Hello! @Sarah Steele and I have been working on this song about Jesus' second coming, based off of Malachi 4:1-3 and Zechariah 12. We would love your input on the lyrics more specifically, there are some spots where we can't find the right phrase. If you have any other input about the overall song that you think should be reworked please let us know. Thanks! VERSE 1 When you appear in glory, You will break open the skies. All of your foes will tremble, For the Victor has arrived! And when you appear in power, You will set creation free. All of the earth will worship And will shout its jubilee! // For the end of suffering --or-- And when you appear in power With a voice of roaring seas We will fall down and worship At the sound of your decree --or-- And when you appear in power With a face of blazing sun We will fall down and worship For the/our victory is won CHORUS On that day, we will see the Living Cornerstone. On that day, you will wipe our tears away. On that day, every knee will bow before your throne Oh, how we long, how we long — for that day! VERSE 2 When you appear with fire, You will rectify all wrong. Sin will be crushed forever, For your righteous hand is strong. And when you appear in splendor, Mighty angels by your side, You’ll bring us home to Heaven, For you’ve purified your bride. BRIDGE Come, Lord Jesus, come, oh come! (We are waiting here for you.) Come, Lord Jesus, come, oh come! (Come and make all things new.) Come, Lord Jesus, come, oh come! (We are waiting here for you) Come, Lord Jesus, All: Jesus, come, oh come! FINAL CHORUS On that day, you will rise with healing in your wings On that day, the dead will rise in victory?? // we will stand before our King?? On that day, ever near, you fin’lly will appear. Oh, how we long, how we wait To see the dawn of that day When you will make all things new—on that day!
Psalm 88 - My Soul is Full of Trouble (edit)
Update: pasted lyrics & recording inline below. How do you endure suffering, when God gives no answer? This song attempts to capture the dark emotions and unsettling questions of such times. But even in the depths of despair, the lament exercises faith by continuing to cry out to God. 4/4, 65bpm Here's the outline: - Verse 1 - God, I am in great distress - Verse 2 - God, You have caused all my suffering - Chorus - God, I cry to You. How can any good come from this? - Verse 3 - God, if You don't save me, I will die - Verse 4 - God, why have you afflicted me? Lyrics: V1 My soul is full of trouble, my life draws near Sheol. O God of my salvation to You I raise my cry. I am a man without strength like one poured out to death, like those whom You remember no more. V2 My soul is full of anger, I suffer by Your plan. By friends I am forsaken, You've taken them from me. Your waves have overwhelmed me, Your wrath I can't escape. You've shut me in behind and before. Chorus Let my pray'r come to You, incline Your ear, Lord, to my cry. Ev'ry day I call upon You, O God! Is Your love known in the grave, or Your wonders in the dark? Ev'ry night I call upon You, O God. V3 My soul is full of anguish, my eyes are dim with grief. God, when will You deliver and lift me from the pit? How can Your faithfulness, Lord, be told by one destroyed? Or Your goodness by those abandoned? V4 My soul is full of questions, You've put me in the dark. I seek but can not find You, have You not heard my cries? Why do You hide Your face, God and cast my soul away? Oh, why must I endure affliction? Final tag Ev'ry night I seek Your mercy Ev'ry day I seek Your love Ev'ry night I call upon You, O God.
More to You, O Lord
Oh to live more to you, O Lord For you have redeemed my soul Oh to live more to you, O Lord I was saved to do your will Chorus Everyday I live by mercy Everyday I live by grace Working out what you’ve done for me At the cross, my debt erased
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