Under 10 minutes was good today but for some reason the video was grainy and glitchy. This was another one about openings.

This lesson covers mostly description.

Another editing session. I hope you learn something from it, or at least are entertained.

This one is about getting the reader to relate to the character by having the character feel, see, hear, etc. It went long again because I try to fix a sentence at the end. If you want to skip that part, I'll understand.

A lesson on how not to write an opening.