When writing your copy many people get more attached and feel trust when your copy is actually specific.
Here's how to do it fellas:
1-
Instead of: I made $300
Say: I made $358.
This makes it more realistic and buillds trust for your readers.
2-
Instead of: Every business uses copywriting
Say: %95 of businesses who use copywriting say they scaled their revenue by %45. (out of my head but you get it).
3-
Instead of: This product will help you save time
say: This product will help you save your precious time so you don't ned to waste it on unnecessary work and can actually spend it with your wife and kids and go to the holiday you always wished for.
The more specific the more credibility for your readers and becomes not boring to read.
Hope it was helpful friends.
-Boby