Struggling to explain what your Skool is actually about? Drop your current About page headline / first line below and I’ll tell you: 1. Is it clear WHO it’s for? 2. Is the outcome SPECIFIC enough? 3. Would I keep reading? Your first line needs to answer: “Is this for me, and why should I even care?” If it doesn’t do that quickly, people click away before they even see what's INSIDE your community.

Hi, I'm Lindsey, and I'm finally getting started with the Grow Your Skool Sprint! I just completed Day 1: about page updated! ✅ (I've legit been working on this all day!! Mostly creating a new VSL) I help women who know they make good money but have nothing to show for it to break the cycle of financial stress, master their budget using YNAB (a money app), and finally build a peaceful, confident relationship with their money inside my community, The Empowered Money Circle. Here's a before and after of my about page text (forgot the full before screenshot 🤦🏻‍♀️🤣 But I had a meh VSL and no testimonials.) 👇 See the live page here 👉 https://www.skool.com/the-empowered-money-circle-9199/about My thoughts/questions: The VSL ended up being 6:30 long, is that too much? As an outsider, is there anything unclear or that feels like lingo/jargon? Is there anything you feel is missing? Thanks so much!!

A month later and things are really starting to take off!

I’d love to see where everyone is at with their about pages. This would be a pretty cool place to see our improvements. I’ll go first..⬇️

I’ve added 8 sign ups over the past couple of days and increased my actual conversion (excluding the 30 day lag) from 2.6% to 5%. This seems really solid since it is to a free trial then paid community 🤩