Hi, I'm Lindsey, and I'm finally getting started with the Grow Your Skool Sprint! I just completed Day 1: about page updated! β
(I've legit been working on this all day!! Mostly creating a new VSL) I help women who know they make good money but have nothing to show for it to break the cycle of financial stress, master their budget using YNAB (a money app), and finally build a peaceful, confident relationship with their money inside my community, The Empowered Money Circle. Here's a before and after of my about page text (forgot the full before screenshot π€¦π»ββοΈπ€£ But I had a meh VSL and no testimonials.) π See the live page here π https://www.skool.com/the-empowered-money-circle-9199/about My thoughts/questions: The VSL ended up being 6:30 long, is that too much? As an outsider, is there anything unclear or that feels like lingo/jargon? Is there anything you feel is missing? Thanks so much!!