Any feedback to improve my home page https://onlinebusinessroadmap.pickyaura.com/

Hi, I built a trial website as I am not ready for the actual website yet. I would like to get honest feedbacks to improve it. https://onlinebusinessroadmap.pickyaura.com/

Hello everyone. You all were very helpful a couple months back with giving me amazing feedback when roasting my about page. so..... I am back to ask you to ROAST MY LANDING PAGE that I built for my community. My skin is thick so don't hold anything back. Throw the tomatoes and cabbage at me if you have too in order for this landing page to serve the purpose it is designed for feedback is essential. TIA https://floridalieninvesting.com/

Hey everybody! New to skool, and just began setting up my first classroom! It’s still a work in progress, but I’m here to ask- what can and should I do differently or better in the coming days? Thanks in advance! https://www.skool.com/scooters-garage-1270/about?ref=1c1ca2a1037243a998f2fb47b2e1341e

https://ethelsgemvault.com/community I decided my ecosystem needed a landing page for my skool community. About half of my members come from other platforms primarily facebook and many of them are unfamiliar with Skool the platform. I created the landing page to be used in my content for platforms like facebook with the expectation that individuals unfamiliar with skool will have a higher conversion rate for joining my community. I am interested to hear thoughts and perspectives on the landing page from an "I use skool perspective" and a "what is skool perspective". I have thick skin so don't think you are hurting my feelings I respect honesty. I also built this page less than 24 hours ago so I could use the second set of eyes. Thanks in Advance