This page is for a recreated and rebranded membership that goes live mid-April. So now is the perfect time for feedback. Hit me with it and don’t be shy. What’s interesting? What’s confusing? Even if you aren’t the target demographic, I’m open to your thoughts. Thanks in advance. https://lpages.theholymess.com/the-holy-weigh/

I'd love to know if it's clear from my homepage what I offer my clients. Do you think I need more detail on the homepage? Also, do I do a good enough job of building trust? https://zenafreelancewriter.com/ Thanks in advance!

Hello, all. After some very kind and detailed feedback, I made the updates to my website home page. I don't think I missed anything, but am open to feedback! Thank you. https://www.sevtalksmoney.com/ Changes I made: 1. Created checkmarks for the statements above the fold...get out of debt, save for retirement, grow your wealth so they don't appear to be clickable. 2. Also removed the block of words on the appointment calendar so after you click through "start the conversation" on the webpage, it takes you directly to the calendar options. 3. Reduced the number of icons and made the Skool icon more noticeable. 4. Activated the reviews so they now scroll instead of showing just one review. 5. Changed the bottom block from black to the purple gradient to match other parts of the website and made "Yes, I need it" more prominent with background and text color change. 6. Removed the squiggly line under Build Wealth Today and replaced it with a revolving circle. 7. Edited "scroll to top" button to make it pop a little. White background with brighter gold arrow. https://www.sevtalksmoney.com/

https://minooshinde.com/ I like to get the feedback if moms of preteens and teens would find the content compelling to try my community. I know I have not explicitly mentioned Preteens-Teens yet, apart from that I am just curious if the content will land for them.

After spending years hunting cult psychology secrets and testing on memberships and communities, we created our Attraction framework based on the core pieces needed to get get buy in. It comes down to creating a strong sense of belonging... making people feel like they're on the right mission with the right people. I just built this framework into a tool so you can get "our Cult Creator brain" to roast your About page and see if you are nailing the right elements needed to get people to join. It will show you what needs to be dialed in further to get a stronger message that converts. And it will then rank you from "milk" (a commodity) to "Kool Aid" (a Cult Brand people CHOOSE to buy) Would love some homies to test it out before we get it finalized. All you need to do is copy your About page and paste it in. Roast my Roaster?? V2: https://claude.ai/public/artifacts/ed1e9ca0-92b2-40dc-a09a-512d8c6dc768 Let's get it fam 🤙