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First of all, I want to repeat that I am very humbled & grateful to have my above page and community roasted by the one and only

I have made the adjustments that he suggested:

Shorter about page copy
Change about page copy to reflect more results/fun/ease than all of the mechanics & hard work
Very simple, granular first steps in the classroom instead of overwhelming, complex things
Probably something else... but I'm always a work in progress.

I hope those things help you!

If you want to get some ideas for yourself (or if you have any other feedback, I'm open to it), you can check out my about page here.

Shoutout to Goose!

And, if you're reading this, you're next... submit your shit and get support!

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